Sunday, April 22, 2012

Second Draft Project Text


Gustavo Santana
March 7, 2012
English 114B
Sean, Pessin

Battle for Control
            Battle for control has been fought for and died for generations upon generations. Control differs depending on the situation. In the books ender’s game and speaker for the dead by Orson ScottCard, Ender a young boy was controlled all his life till he grows up and shows the world that he is their controller. Ender is a tactical genius his abilities progress as he ages. The people around him begin to lose his grasp on Ender as he ages and his words start to mean something. When people are young they are ignored and closed off from having an opinion. When age kicks in people starts to listen because once voice rises. The power to speak is one of the many contributors to maintain power. Ender went from being controlled to being in control all due to his abilities to think critically observe and solve different situations.        
            When a human is young his authority is taken for granted and there for is forced to follow the rules of “higher” authority. In Ender’s Game; Ender, was being controlled and watched over since he was born. Proving the point that even when your born the authority comes from the older people. By putting a monitor on Ender the government is saying that Ender is their property. Being the “government’s property” Ender is forced to face life’s situations by himself while being monitored by Colonel Graff. As Enders life progresses in the book he is thrown into more and more situations that he has to deal with by himself. On the way to Battle School Ender meets knew people; Colonel Graff makes Ender an enemy by arguing that he is the smartest one of the bunch. Even after Ender is trying not to put himself in a critical position to be hated by his school mates, Graff wants to make him solitary and that makes Ender sort of dangerous. Enders childhood was taken away when he entered battle school by force and is being controlled by the older authority all because Colonel Graff thinks he will be the one to end the bugger wars.
After humanity had overcame the first bugger war due to their past commander Mazer Rackham. All duty falls to Ender and therefore takes his childhood by force. Ender lives the life of a kid soldier not that of a normal child. When all duty falls to Ender this makes his life controlled by those who want to mend what is to become of him. Ender is a tactical genius which causes more pressure on him because he is constantly being reminded that he needs no help to solve his own problems. In one of the many events in the book Ender is being bullied by Bernard, whose arm he broke in the shuttle, Ender intelligently and tactically defeats him by hacking Bernard’s desk and mocking him with messages. Once Bernard’s pride and power was broken the rest of his launch mates see and recognize Ender’s power. This point made reestablishes the thesis by mentioning that the one who has the power has the authority over others. Even though Ender is controlled by the higher authorities he still has and fights for his authority against people his age. With Respect comes power which is authority once that respect is shattered the authority is gone. While Ender rest for his matches he goes into a virtual video game world that also pressures him by throwing random thing his way the computer also has a sort of control of him until he stops playing; that being said as he progresses through the videogame world and beats it, it becomes significant. It says that he is no longer going to be controlled, that he is escaping the grasp that power has over him by other and using it for his own motives. Moved to a new platoon after defeating a simulation video game, Ender gains experience which also gives him authority because being moved to a new army at such a young age gives him power. When he reaches his army he is bullied by the captain. Bonzo; the captain of salamander army, being older commands and bullies Ender because he was mad that he traded off a good platoon captain in exchange for Ender. Viewing this Bonzo has power over Ender such as the government over Ender because he is older and holds a position of power. Being a luanchy (trainee) he practices to learn how to move around in null gravity and his way of thinking gives him power over everyone else his way of thought is abstract while others think in one way. Taking the upper hand by taking everything he learns and using it for his own way and movements gives him power and authority because he prevails at everything he does.
Moving up ranks and keeping the leader board makes Bonzo angry with Ender and plans to murder him. At this point Ender is already in Rat Army because he was traded off their he meets Dink Meeker which teaches him more about the game battles. Enders power increases as his experience and tactic skills increase along the line he is also making an impact as the best player in the whole battle school. Colonel Graff finally decides that Ender is now ready to have his own army by giving him the army that has been abolished after having the reputation of having a losing streak. Changing the losing streak into a winning streak, Colonel Graff starts to lose his power over Ender because Ender is getting older and is defeating the game. By Ender defeating every challenge thrown at him, Colonel Graff changes the game around in order to try to beat Ender but is aware that if Ender beats the game he is the one to save humanity. Dragon Army consists of nothing but launchies given to Ender from Graff as a sort of challenge to train them and beat the game. By being given launchies and an army it’s a way of Graff shifting some of the power over to Ender, Graff views that he is almost ready for command school. Pressured from all the battle Ender is over worked by Graff because he is now throwing more battles at him constantly each day, the number increased from one to two games a day. This still says that Graff is in control and will keep being in control because Ender has not yet earned the right to the full power. Approaching command school Ender has stepped into a newer level of experience and solitude. Moving into a new environment can be related to when he first stepped into battle school not knowing anyone and it deprives him of his power. Once again life throws at him situation to which cannot escape from. Training from Mazer Rackham intensifies the pressure to the point where all he can think and dream is about battle. Ender is exposed to a new kind of authority which haunts him a takes him away from his old self. This kind of pressure and at this point in his life takes him away from his childhood and deeper and deeper into maturity. Once with power in his grasp once again, Ender is trusted by the people he’s met and trained with so far, his friends.
Being in command school for a while he is given an opportunity to work with his friends from battle school which he thought have been left behind. Reuniting with his friends and being able to work with them in rigorous training. His friends no longer respect Ender as his friend they respect him as a higher level of authority between themselves as a team he is now their commander. His friends let him know that he has power and him being commander they follow everything he says. Having trained for months Enders squad is ready for their final test or as Ender knows it by simulation. Mazer makes his power silent all in a goal to make Ender the higher authority over the Buggers. Ender grasping his power kills the buggers without knowing by blowing up their home planet in one shot along with his squad. After being revealed that he has killed the Buggers he is blown away by the fact that he also killed Bonzo and Stilson. That all along Ender had reversed the power against him to his aggressors and defeated them permanently. Ender throughout the book has killed numerous times without him knowing and has thought himself as different from his brother Peter; thus being said Ender has never been like Peter, He was always himself and had always had authority over others due to his intelligence. The Battle school itself has power over everyone including Ender because being trapped in space with no communication with the outside world it makes people crazy, And the student in battle school are forced to be placed in armies and segregate each other by being put in different groups. There is a hierarchy placed in the school by the reputation each army has by winning battles against each other. The battle school itself is a main milestone to Enders rise in power willingly. Ender chose to be powerful but unwillingly claimed some of the power by defeating his enemies permanently. Defeating the bugger’s transitions into place that he knows has more authority over himself than anyone else. Throughout the book he is given chances to take back what is his but refuses and continues to the path of defeating life’s challenges.
Looking at the many events throughout battle school starting with his first encounter with the simulation, are key subject to the point of how he tries to escape what his holding him back from his full potential. Moving along those lines as he continues to defeat the obstacles the feeling that he is earning his freedom back gets stronger all the way till he defeats his final challenge. After being trained to defeat the buggers he then travels to the distant planet that the buggers have lived in and there he finds an egg of the hive queen. This opens up to the next book Speaker for the Dead and also traces back to his first encounter with the video game realm that the computer generates for him at random. This creates some sort of web to Enders next phase in life. Ultimately the true ruler and most powerful authority is the universe itself and how it changes Enders life as if it was destiny. Ender being able to mend life to suit his way manages to balance the power of the universe inside Ender’s Game to almost the same height. Above all what let to Enders rise in authority was because throughout his life’s events he was being helped to gain what he know has. Every character played a vital role in his dominance over the other subjects making him the main character. In Ender’s eyes he wasn’t and didn’t want power he was just fighting for survival to every obstacle. Ender treated life as a game and what any other character would do with a game, beat it.
In comparison to Speaker for the Dead, Ender’s Game is overall about Ender shaping his life to be in control of the people around him. His way of speaking and thinking suppresses others without them knowing it. He reads people like things to be conquered. After the Bugger wars Ender writes a book called The Hive Queen and the Hegemon, in this book he opens people’s eyes on how to think not only for themselves. An example was when the buggers were killing the humans the humans saw it as a treat and sought revenge. On the bugger side they did not know that they were killing they simply thought they were protecting themselves. As time goes, Ender travels to space to another world the world were the buggers used to live. When he travels and travels he doesn’t age as much as he would of stayed in one place because he is traveling at the speed of light. This is a perfect example that he is now in control even of his age. The significance that in the novel Ender can control his own age by traveling at the speed of light says that he has power over others because he doesn’t age as fast as a person living in a planet. After many years people forget of Ender and as times goes by Ender becomes the Speaker for the Dead a sort of priest. Based on the book Hive Queen and the Hegemon, Ender has made a new religion that focuses on telling the true story of the dead. Using His unique abilities Ender is able to guess what the person was like before they died and speaks for them as they were and not lie that they were just good people. He gathers information by mending the people around him by making friends with them and ends up using their information for the speaking of the deceased. There is one scene in the book where Ender says rhetorically that he is in control and will maintain in control. The son of the person he was to speak for was following in the footsteps of his father. The son is about 6 yrs old and tries to stab Ender not knowing what would happen. The kid’s father was aggressive and hit his family mostly his wife Novinha. Ender grabs the child and maintains him in his lap detaining him so he can stop hurting Ender. As the child throws tantrums and hit Ender in the shins with his feet he is trying to get away. Ender knowing that letting the kid go will cause the child to win and continue being disrespectful to him, he doesn’t let go. As the child becomes exhausted knowing that Ender won’t give up the child pees on Ender’s lap as a last result to get away. Ender maintains the child in his lap, the child becomes broken and bursts into tears and hugs Ender. Analyzing the child’s behavior Ender came to the conclusion that he was the only one that was hurt the most and looked up to his father. This is an example of how Ender gets his information for the speaking ceremony and also says that he is the one in control and will keep in control due to his way of thinking. In the story many people that live in Lusitania called for a speaker for a number of deaths that have occurred due to a new species of aliens. Enders real mission in Lusitania is speaking for the new species of aliens. He is trying to figure out if they are ramen or varelse or Djur. Ramen being strangers from another species. Varelse being strangers from another species who aren’t able to communicate with Homo sapiens. Djur, being monsters with no soul and no intelligent motive. The reason why Ender is speaking for this new species is because he has a primary mission apart from the second one. He is put in charge of taking care of resurrecting the species of buggers. He has the power over this resurrection because at any given time he can choose not to resurrect them and end them permanently. On the other hand he sees this as the only way of forgiveness for killing off the buggers and his guilt is overpowering him. He wants to figure out if this new species is killing humans because they are forced to or is it part of their culture to do it and mean not to do it in violence but as a blessing. Enders power is once more challenged and due to the fact that he is battling an unknown enemy and has to guess what their motives are. When Ender first stepped onto Lusitania, that was the first battle that challenged his power because he is now in a planet, were catholic religion rules and looks down upon the speaker for the dead. In Lusitania no one trusts him so he has to figure out a way for the people to learn to trust him. Throughout the book ender is constantly challenged as if life is trying to defeat him. Analyzing the book correctly Ender is never really in power over life just over most of the people due to his genius and experience and age. As he travels he lives longer than most people managing to stay at a young age. As he travels he is gaining experiences and becomes more powerful. He has an advantage over other people because he is constantly viewing the universe differently and his experience boosts him above and beyond all others. One thing that Ender loses because of his quest to resurrect the hive queen is he lost his sister valentine. Valentine, left in another planet will age when Ender travels at the speed of light and she will have aged and have her kids. This is significant because this is where his power over people is questioned its whether u make the sacrifice and lose your sister to resurrect the Hive Queen or stay with your sister. This sacrifice makes the point that Ender doesn’t have control over everything and that he is human and loses once in a while. Throughout the two books the balance of power switches over from person to person but the one it really reflects on is Ender.                 
Power differs between people the stronger one maintains his power the more voice he has over people. Experience plays a part when power comes in to the scene. All throughout a life time people are constantly fighting for that dominance over others making people competitive and dangerous. Ender’s life is a perfect example of how his life was shaped by the adults when he was young to actually shaping his own life when situations were thrown at him. Ender manages to be in control using the power to his advantage in order to get the answers he needs to win at the game of life. There are many aspects of power, whether experience, age or simply authority one thing is is certain in order to have power you must be able to execute it perfectly.                      

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